Thursday, May 25, 2006

It rained today

It rained today…

The skies, all gray
The mood is set,
For us, today.
Is it you or is it me?
Or are these tears ours?
These tears that drop down,
Like wild flowers.
It’s been so long
Since we have met
Still we belong.
Neither your nor mine
It’s ours, this time,
We belong, no need,
To talk or mime…

It rained today…
And I saw you through the clouds
And every drop
That touched my soul
I knew -
It was you.

Wild winds blow
In the cold, we shiver
Fondness in the heart just grows.
The wait was long, but
It’s meant to be
We belong,
You and me…
Out peeps the light
Through the cracks,
And for that single sight
We do thirst.
Like the soothing rhythm of the rain,
Walk this walk
Down the lover’s lane…

It rained today…
And I saw you through the clouds
And every drop that touched my soul
I knew -
It was you.

14 comments:

Geetha said...

yeah. am so glad u remember...n guess wat! it rained d day after i posted it.

Geetha said...

hmmm, lemme see...

General Disarray said...

Interesting, the way it oscillates from rhyme to free verse and back...

Geetha said...

hey long time since i ve seen ur comment... glad ur net s workin.

General Disarray said...

It's working, I don't have much to say, is all :)

Punit Pania said...

heard this one a long time back
N u made me promise I wudn laugh ]
lol

d inspiration aside, I think its a work of art

n guess wat, it rained today too!

hahhahahah

Geetha said...

:D

Chitrak said...

i really like this one.
Some day, when we're all old, they'll publish a book called "The Lost Poetry of Geets". It'll be a best seller.

Geetha said...

hey! thnx chit. :)

Sagar Kolte said...

Nice work geets... :-)

Geetha said...

thnx sagar.

RENEGADE... said...

geetha , im blown away...awesome!!!!!

Geetha said...

hey thanks, renegade. i am honoured.

Geetha said...

thnx.